☑ Cerberos
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[CONTENTID2]The Protector[/CONTENTID2]
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Story Title: The Protector
Author: Cerberos
Main Characters: TOP, Sandara Park
Genre: Action, Angst,
Status: Ongoing
Description of Story: Sandara, an undercover NSA agent, found herself in the middle of a very unusual mission after saving the life of the second most powerful man in the country, Choi Seunghyun, from a car accident.
CRITIQUE:
Story Title: 3.5/5
You're title is a little common. It wasn't intriguing but it is relevant to the story.
Graphics: 7/10
The poster is fine and simple but it really gave off an angst vibe. The title though is a little bit blurred but still readable. You might also think about putting a background for your story. A lot of readers won't even bother giving your story a try if the design is not that attractive enough.
Description and Foreword: 8.5/10
You didn't put any summary in the description or foreword of the story. I only saw
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