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[CONTENTID2]The Protector[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: The Protector

Author: Cerberos

Main Characters: TOP, Sandara Park

Genre: Action, Angst,

Status: Ongoing

Description of Story: Sandara, an undercover NSA agent, found herself in the middle of a very unusual mission after saving the life of the second most powerful man in the country, Choi Seunghyun, from a car accident.

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3.5/5
You're title is a little common. It wasn't intriguing but it is relevant to the story. 

Graphics: 7/10
The poster is fine and simple but it really gave off an angst vibe. The title though is a little bit blurred but still readable. You might also think about putting a background for your story. A lot of readers won't even bother giving your story a try if the design is not that attractive enough.

Description and Foreword: 8.5/10
You didn't put any summary in the description or foreword of the story. I only saw

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08/22/14 ~ 40 stories has been transferred to the Archives.

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