"Blue Moonlight"

Author: bubblestar

Main Characters: Kris, Amber, Sooyoung

Genre: Drama, Romance and

Status: Completed

Description of Story:
Relationship between Kris and Sooyoung was tested with the presence of Sooyoung when Kris and
Sooyoung were caught making love in her car under the blue moonlight.

Story Title: 3/5

The title "Blue Moonlight" sounded kinda mysterious to me, but for some reason, I just didn't really understand the meaning behind it within the story. Maybe I've missed it when I was reading or just didn't comprehend where you were going with this... but I did see it appeared for sure in the end of the story, but that's all. It's why I gave it a neutral scoring because it made me intrigued, yet it didn't capture my understanding while reading it and trying to match it with the title. Unless you were going with the whole saying "Once in a Blue Moon" kind of meaning... then that would make sense... but since I don't know, this is how I will score it. ^^"

Graphics: 6/10

Again, the graphic was very inviting and caught my attention with the whole computer images and sharing it. But the placement of the characters and then that blue moon off in the top corner just looked kind of random to me. Don't get me wrong, it was clean, neat, and focused on those three characters... but it just... seemed, I don't know know. Kind of "bleh". ^^" But I liked it, and why it got one more than neutral of scoring. =]

Description and Foreword: 8/10

The description and the foreword was nicely done. I was highly interested in reading the story and how it would turn out like. There was that hint of drama and doom pending and a foreshadow of what was gonna happened and why it happened and all that. But other than that, it was just a summary to piqued my curiosity and it was done nicely. =] It's just that I'm not much of a fan of a homewrecker and drama and such. Haha... ^^"

Characterization: 8/10

The characters were done nicely, and introduced well. You have your happy couple, and then bam... the other party became introduced and some minors as well. You could tell that despite this character from the other, that there was gonna be some drama bet