☑ whiteknight
Mental Breakdown Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ ARCHIVES"Piercing Us Back Together"
Author: whiteknight
Main Characters: Kris, Chanyeol & Suho
Genre: Angst, Psychological, Romance, Tragedy,
Status: Completed
Description of Story:
When he says he wouldn't leave Kris, he really meant it but Chanyeol is just a human, he can never fight fate.
Then, Suho comes to heal the wound inside Kris's heart as Kris thought the wound was never there all along.
When will Kris come to realize what lies before him or maybe he's just afraid to know the truth?
Because he knew the truth will kill Chanyeol right in front of him.
Critique:
Story Title: 4/5
I really liked the title, especially the word play here.
Graphics: 7/10
Didn't particularly like the poster. Too much empty space all around.
Description and Foreword: 6/10
Grammar mistakes in the description. The foreword was unnecessary.
Characterization: 8/10
The characterization was good. You had a lot of character development and you also managed to tie up everyone's lives nicely at the end.<
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