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[CONTENTID2]My Unwanted Inamorato[/CONTENTID2]
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Story Title: My Unwanted Inamorato
Author: IAmAnExoFan
Main Characters: Kim Jongin, Do Kyungsoo
Genre: Drama, Romance,
Status: On-going
Description of Story: Famous actor and model, Kim Jongin, was loved by everyone; or so he thought. Everything changes when he meets uprising star, Do Kyungsoo, who apparently hates his guts. Add a movie and a popularity contract to that already messed up story and you'd get a complete disaster... or maybe not...
CRITIQUE:
Story Title: 4/5
Honestly your title wasn't my favourite one, yes it's original, yes it's unique and yes it fits your story very well because it's and romance ect but I had to search up the meaning and I'm a very lazy person XD It's eye-catching as you would be wondering what did she mean by that ect ect but if this hasn't been a request, I probably wouldn't have looked at it by the title, by your description and foreword yes I would probably stared at it the whole day but your title to me wasn't my forte, I didn't like it. I'm the type to skim/miss things easily so when you put the meaning for inamorato I skipped it, so maybe put it in bold ^^
Graphics: 9/10
Your poster was fine but it could've been better, now you don't need to change it but I didn't really see much of not romance but something that you could kind of tell that it was comedy , funny, alittle . Your poster is very bright and I know you weren't the one who made it, so I don't want to criticise you because maybe you can't do a re-do but still I felt there should've been something more. It's animated but not too much which is one of my favourite posters (second to soft looking posters XD) so i did like that a lot ^^ Honestly I don't really have much of a clue with poster/editing so I can't really give you much feedback on it, yes I'm a poster graphic designer but I just fiddle around with things XD I was kind of wondering why the two o's in inamorato is in red , does that mean anything ?
Description and Foreword: 10/10
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