[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for LostHuman[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]The Terminator[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: The Terminator

Author: LostHuman 

Main Characters: EXO x You

Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Fantasy/Supernatural, Romance

Status: On-going

Description of Story: 12 Boys was used for a top secret experiment. 6 of them was used for destruction, 6 was used for salvation. When they all come together, their single purpose was to TERMINATE, or is there more?

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 2/5

Your story title was okay, It was kind of unique but too common. I found many stories titles like yours so I didn’t find it that interesting to read. But, we can’t judge a book by it’s cover, right?

 

Graphics: 2/10

Your graphic was unattractive. I would’ve have liked it better if it didn’t have a graphic as it ruined your story’s appearance. Your background was okay as it didn’t stand out but it blended too much.

 

Description and Foreword: 2/10

Your description was great, however, your video ruined it. If any of the readers watched it, it means they have spoilt most parts of the story as you said it’s like the video just that you added some extra parts like romance. Also, the character description was grammatically incorrect and it looked messy. I suggest that you take it out of the foreword. We can get to