[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for GetLayD[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]The Wind That Vanished Into The Twilight[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: The Wind That Vanished Into The Twilight

Author: GetLayD

Main Characters: Luhan & Lay; Layhan

Genre: Angst, Romance, ,

Status: Completed

Description of Story: Luhan disappears without a trace; leaving a heart-broken Lay.

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

Personally, I like your title. It was relevant to the story and it was really connected to what you posted in your description and foreword. It was a bit long but for me I found it interesting and unique.

Graphics: 6/10

I read your author's note on the foreword part and you said there was a typo? Hahaha.. :D I'll consider that you have a temporary poster but since you don't have a poster for now, I'll give you 6 points.

Description and Foreword: 8/10

You description was okay. I would have prefered if you added more details to elaborate the main theme of the story. I also like the lines your put on your foreword. I think I prefer you putting that in your description than on foreword. But that's just me. Mehehe. :3

Characterization: 10/10

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