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[CONTENTID2]Pikakyu! I choose you![/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Pikakyu! I choose you!

Author: --obsidian

Main Characters: Cho Kyuhyun, Lee Sungmin

Genre: Friendship, Romance,

Status: Completed

Description of Story: Sungmin is obsessed with that stupid Pokémon and Kyuhyun's just about had enough.

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

I found this one hilarious not because it was stupid but it was fun to see a remake on Pokemon with Kyuhyun and Sungmi. I really really did like it. It fits in with your story concept very well and you can also find it towards the ending in the one-shot ^^ Very original

Graphics: 9/10

So since I woke up (it's 9:53am right now) the yellow is kind off irritating but it matches in with the Pokemon Pikachu colours and I liked for the background you had Kyuhyun and Sungmi in Pikachu costumes ^^ It does catch the readers attention which is good since many people judge the story on the poster. 

Description and Foreword: 10/10

I liked how just put it out there, giving a summary of the story in a single sentence but didn't give out too

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