[CONTENTID1]Archive:Review for heart_and_seoul[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]After Earth[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: After Earth

Author: heart_and_seoul

Main Characters: OC, Chanyeol

Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Mystery and Romance

Status: On-going

Description of Story: The end of the world has come and gone, and most of what is left of Earth is scraped away by floods, storms, diseases and Removers, who are ready to take away any spotted survivors away for test experiments or even worse fates. It is a hardscrabble life for the remaining people, as they must fight amongst each other in order to survive. Kang Yuna is no different from the other survivors, scavenging what is left of Earth's resources and fighting for her survival. One day, she is running from a pack of wild hounds when a mysterious boy, Chanyeol, comes into her life and rescues her. He then convinces her to join him in search for a group of survivors. She promptly joins in, after her home is destroyed, and they embark on a thrilling journey filled with romance, survival and, of course, some bad bad-guy -kicking.

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

I think your title is unique, I searched up if there was any and there were a couple but even so your one links in very well with your concept ^^

Graphics: 9.5/10

There's a very angst feeling from it, which is good since it fits in well with your story. I like how you have several posters but still have the same meaning towards the story. I loved the quote in one of your posters: "When nowhere is safe, where do you go?" Fear,scared, power is all seen throughout the poster and in the story ^^

Description and Foreword: 10/10

I think it's perfect. It's pretty much flawless. There's not any grammar errors. It shows a bit of the story but not too much which people tend to do a lot. For your description it tells us about what happened before she had to survive in the wilderness by her