[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for hopexdreams[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Forevermore[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Forevermore

Author: hopexdreams

Main Characters: OC and Baekhyun

Genre: Angst

Status: Completed

Description of Story: Some things were never meant to be forgotten. They just stopped being a priority in our lives. This story is about how 27-year-old Jung Hyejin feels after she saw Baekhyun's death on the newspaper's entertainment section's headlines.

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5
The title is simple but easy to remember. It has that angst feeling in it. The title suits the theme of the story and even though the title is common, it is appropriate for the story which is better than choosing a title with complicated words that doesn't even meet the story's idea.

Graphics: 7.5/10
The poster is fine and simple, and the angst feeling is there which is a good thing. You might want to think about putting up a background for your story to make it more attractive.  Make sure the background matches your poster.

You can try putting your poster too at Chapter 1 to add more effect.

Description and Foreword: 9.5/10

I like your description. I realized that it was going to be a dramatic story because of your description. It was not short but not that long either and it contained the right amount of information that is needed to make the readers curious of what is to come in the story.

Characterization: 8/10

I like the way you introduced characters. The info is enough to bring that excitement. You made it realistic by making Baekhyun as a real idol at the story while the OC was a fangirl. I really felt like I was Hyejin since I am a fangirl and I like Baekhyun myself.

Plot: 37.5/40
I cannot say that the plot was unique, but I clearly enjoyed it. There were a lot of scenes to which I can relate myself to. I'm pretty sure your readers can relate as well since a lot of them are fangirls. For me, it was a little cliche and predictable but it was not that typical of a story. I also liked the fact that you portrayed her as a 27-year old wife and mom, who was reminiscing her memories back when she was still Baekhyun's fan. It made the story more realistic