[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for sparkle_scorpio[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]The Curse of Full Moon[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: The Curse of Full Moon

Author: sparkle_scorpio

Main Characters: Baekhyun, Chanyeol

Genre: ,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: "Where's mother?"-Baekhyun. "Trust me, Baek. You don't want to see her"-Baekbeom. "But, why?"-Baekhyun. "It's something you shouldn't know. And one more thing"-Baekbeom. "What is it?"-Baekhyun. "Don't go out after 6PM. They roam the mountain at night"-Baekbeom. Baekhyun invited his friends Luhan and Kyungsoo to stay at his family vacation house in the mountain. They were welcomed by Baekhyun's older brother and were having the best time of their lives. Until night fall. 

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

Your title sounds very interesting and unique. It doesn't sound clique nor common so I have nothing bad to say about that. Those titles are very good to read because it attracts the reader. Good job.

 

Graphics: 9/10

I loved both your graphic and background. It suited your story's theme and mood well. However, I didn't really like the EXP picture on the graphic. It's just a personal taste so please don't be offended!

 

Description and Foreword: 6/10

I liked your dezcription. But I would've liked it better if you didn't put the first part of the description. For the foreword, everything was okay except the part you crossed out. If your goin