[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for cuteismysterious[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Panko-chan[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Panko-chan

Author: cuteismysterious

Main Characters: EXO's Baekhyun and Seok Menchu (You/OC)

Genre: Romance

Status: Completed

Description of Story: The story follows the life of Seok Menchu as she met one of her greatest childhood memories. 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3.5/

The title is unique but at the same time weird for me. Why use Panko? What does the word even mean? And then I read the story and I realized why you gave that title.

Graphics: 5/10

I don't really like the poster. Sorry. It's too simple and doesn't look creative and presentable at all. You should make your poster look professional as much as possible. Readers tend to decide if they will read your story or not through your graphics. It's a sad reality, yes, but we can't really do anything about it so I suggest changing your poster. You might also want to think about putting a background to your story to add more effects and attractiveness. Make sure it matches your poster and that make sure it's romance-themed.

Description and Foreword: 9.5/10

I have to say though, I love your description! I love how you used a poem as a way to introduce your story. It was very fresh and unique. It didn't contain that much information wherein you stated what would happen in the future, rather you created curiousness among your readers which is a good think.

Characterization: 7/10

There was no problem with the characters. I think they were explained well in the story although I suggest putting like a character chart at your description/foreword to introduce your characters but make it short/brief so your readers will get curious more.

Plot: 28/40

The plot was nice. If was fresh and unique and it was really refreshing since I haven't read a lot of fanfictions like this one. I was confused though at the ending. That was so much of a cliffhanger. I was also confused about the picture she saw at the newspaper? Was is a picture a decade ago? Because if it was, you should add something at the flashback where they took a picture together so add more proof. I felt like the picture came all of a sudden. Also mind your spacing. If the setting of the story changed, put a double space or put the word Flashback before a paragraph so we can recognize it or you