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[CONTENTID2]Activating Feelings[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Activating Feelings

Author: taemaeilin_

Main Characters: Kim Myungsoo (L), Shim Jaeyang (O

Genre: Action

Status: Completed

Description of Story: What comes to your mind when you see the word 'assassin'? Cold-blooded killer? Mysterious murderer? Or a heartless creature? If you were to think of it carefully, assassins have the strongest hearts. Why do I say so? It's hard to see someone get hurt, but it's even harder to kill your own kind. Assassins are well trained, to the point that they have to block all emotions, even deactivate them.

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

I never found a story with this kind of title so it's not cliche. Its very unique. It draws attention of every other person around here to make her want to click on your story and to read it.You did great job with choosing title of the story that nobody dared to use.

 

Graphics: 10/10

Poster is amazing! Because it matches well with the plot of your story and also the background, it gives that myesterious dark feel. Who ever made you both I am simply amased. So good job to person on well poster/bg making. She did good job on both.

 

Description and Foreword: 9/10

I gave you nine only because back in the foreword you put this above the plot " 재앙 -- Jaeang ; Calamity -- An event causing great and often sudden damage or distress; a disaster". So this is what I think I personly would elete this and simply leave the plot line, but its your dessicion, you don;t need to delete it if you don't want to. Description was short but yet she leaves readers wanting to read more. Whic is great. So you did here good job as well. In my exsistence on AFF I haven't read angst.stories with this plo