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"Flower"

Author: moelolz

Main Characters: Exo M, Kim Jongin, Oh Sehun, Kim Soyoung (OC)

Genre: Angst, Fantasy/Supernatural, Romance, Romcom

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
Kim Soyoung is her name.
The name means beautiful flower.
Just like her name, Kim Soyoung is raised up to become a dainty flower, a mere tool to bring fame and money to her high social standing parents.
Yet when she died because she was sentenced to death by her own husband, Kim Soyoung found herself given another chance to live again, but with one condition:
And that is to find the six deadly spirits also known as Exo M and return them back to their prision.
And so Kim Soyoung set off, travelling the human and supernatural realms in order find Exo M.
But who knew that she may find this journey more rewarding and heart-throbbing than expected?

 

  Critique:

Story Title: 3/5

The title is pretty unique and interesting. It's also really simple and sometimes that's a problem with a story title. Simple titles usually don't bring and to the reader. The title is interesting but it doesn't have something that could intrigue the reader. If you add something like: because I'm a flower,or i'm the flower. Something like that to catch the readers attention, something that sets the stories uniqueness.

 

Graphics: 7/10

I like the poster, it's simple yet elegant just like her. The only thing I don't like is the background, it doesn't go with the story or poster at all. It's too pink, and too simple for this story. I would recommend adding something like the different abilities of exo-m. Like the signs of their powers, or pictures of them with their abiliti

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