"60sec."

Author: Moony_Kat

Main Characters: Kim Sunggyu | OC | (Kim Myungsoo (L) - semi-main)

Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Fantasy/Supernatural, Mystery

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
When called to investigate an escape from a maximum security mental hospital, detective Kim Sunggyu and his team discover that the patient missing was an important eye witness in a murder case that took place in 2003. And so, Go Seul Ki become the most wanted person by both the police force and a hidden enemy.
Will Sunggyu and his team get to the end of the case and find Seul Ki? Or will the traitors infiltrated all around him manage to get to her first and destroy the detectives?

Story Title: 4.5/5

At first, I didn't know why the hell you decided to choose that title; 60sec. I felt like you could've chose something that sounded 'cooler'. Not like your current one isn't but still, it doesn't sound too appetizing and honestly not too eye-catching either. Though after reading it for a while, I understood why you chose that title. 60sec. related to the time it took for the 3 murderers to murder a family of 3 but they left the girl because they were out of time. There wasn't too much for me to comment on the title but my first impression of the title wasn't the best. Honestly, I stress on having a good title, whereas I come up with retarded ones but that isn't the case. Yes, titles can intrigue a user to read your story, that's the whole point with coming up with an interesting title, but there are some awesome stories with crappy titles and the reason why they have so much views, comments, subscribers, upvoters is because of the description so honestly, it doesn't need to have alot of meaning behind it. I mean, if you saw a title called: The Guy Who Ate a Frog, you'd be totally interested? No? Okay -3-

Graphics: 9.5/10

Your graphics scream out mystery, slight horror - though not really, angst, tension. Your extra decorations like the clock, I find has many meanings. For example, the clock, is meaning about the murder in 2003, meaning it was a long time ago murder case and it still hasn't been solved and the white thingy under the girl, I feel like it makes her mystical and full of mystery. I kind of think it's the ghost of her parents but that's just me being delusional. lol. Your background is simple, with the words 60secs. and it has the purple, brown, dark red colour for the title which fits in with the story more.

Description and Foreword: 7/10

Your beginning on the description, was really awkward and it was like, it is correct but incorrect at the same time and honestly I didn't really understand the quote about treasure. Maybe because you haven't went too much into the story yet but it felt like it wasn't meant to be there. The little intro really caught my eye and I was really interested so you did a good job with that!

Characterization: 5.5/10

The characters were mainly from infinite - a group I don't really have much interest in but that I'm not biased so it didn't change any of my feelings while reading this story. Sunggyu, seems a little 'marty-sue' but I get that his character is meant to be higher up from everybody else and that he has much more authority t