[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for kroncubine[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Farewell, My Last Romance[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Farewell, My Last Romance

Author: kroncubine

Main Characters: Kris, EXO-M, Ell (OC)

Genre: Angst, Romance

Status: Ongoing

Description of Story: EXO-M was supposed to only attend music and variety shows in their visit to the leader Kris' hometown, Guangzhou, but a fan changed it all

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3/5

Your title is UNIQUE AND ORIGINAL but the words you used weren't really, Farewell, My Last Romance. Not exactly what I would call, original (by the individual words) but it still attracts the eye, and it makes the reader curious, wanting to read on more. Even so some might just overlook/skim over it mainly because, you used COMMON words or words that are over-used in the world of AFF

 

Graphics: 10/10

Your graphics..I didn't like them... I FREAKING LOVED THEM. The only thing is for the background, sometimes I get distracted which isn't the best thing to get as they reader won't pay attention and then opt out of it = less views, maybe change it and get the designer to make you a background. 

For the poster; it was definitely romance and fluff with the roses and the pink background, everything is like a fairy tale, perfect until you see the space between them, kinda meaning he can't get to her later.. heartbreaking. I honestly LOVED IT ^^

 

Description and Foreword: 10/10

You have like literally nothing for the summary of the story and if it was the little quote thingy part...I didn't count that as it, it was too short and I felt really bored so I just skipped the whole page..... the foreword is the first page everybody sees thus making it VERY important, if I was bored, do you expect me to keep reading if I