[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for MrsChanana[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Beating Him at his Own Game[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Beating Him at his Own Game

Author: MrsChanana

Main Characters: Kim Junhyung, Jang Jihye

Genre: Drama, Family

Status: Completed

Description of Story: It is a story about betrayal of husband to wife. And the wife took revenge by creating an account at his usual dating sites to lure him into her trap.

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 4/5

The title wasn't that unique, but somehow it was catchy and it gained my interest a bit. The first thing I thought though at first was that it would be a cute/romantic/comedy-themed story, which is was wrong. Hahahaha. Well, that was just my first impression. But the title matched the theme of the story nonetheless so good job.

Graphics: 0/0

I won't grade you for this one since you don't have a poster nor a background YET, but I suggest getting one soon. Most readers tend to go on with the story if it has nice graphics. So to increase their satisfaction and interest, get a poster soon. :)

Description and Foreword: 9/10

Actually, your description was fine. Personally, I think you gave out the necessary information needed for a description. I think it was a bit short of a description though. Yes, it was fine, but I think you should add more to stir interest for your viewers.

Characterization: 9.5/10

I think it would be better if you used well-known characters. You said you used the names that you though of right? Well, I think it's better to use idols as your characters. Readers here on AFF commonly read stories from idol groups, especially popular ones like EXO, Infinite, B.A.P, Super Junior, etc. It would attract more readers, I tell you. It's still your decision though. (If you do change it though, put their names on your tags.) Anyway, you explained their personalities quite well. Especially Junhyung's. Overall, good job.

Plot: 37/40

The plot wasn't unique, since I have read some stories like this before, but it still came out interesting for me. I was glad that she didn't forgive him at the end. I personally believe life should not always have a happy ending. Anyway, the plot was good. I like how she got her revenge by making