[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for Quack23[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Let's love EXO[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Let's love EXO

Author: Quack23

Main Characters: Jin, EXO

Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Schoollife

Status: On-going

Description of Story: What will happen if you find out that you have 6 handsome, caring, and protective cousins?, plus 4 cousin's friends and your two best friend from China, leaving in the same house. What will change your life? What will occured? What will happen to your happy life?What will you encounters?

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3/5

Honestly 'Let's Love Exo' doesn't really apply to your story, yes Exo is in it, yes it's about love but still I didn't think it matched. While reading through your story there wasn't much of love in the air and it was more like a story about bestfriends and cousins ^^; The title sounds more of a campaign or something supporting EXO. Not really great for a story title

Graphics: 5/10

Well, you put your poster in the starting at the 5th chapter and the title in the poster is different from the title right now; Entangled Love -> Let's love EXO. I also think the poster doesn't really match the story either, I think you should've just put the two main characters that are going to be in love and put Exo in the background. Wasn't much of a romance poster ^^; There wasn't a background either but I don't really care about the backgrounds unless it's for an angst, dark story then yes you need one. >.< I think when people put in backgrounds it annoys me, especially if they are different shades XD

Description and Foreword: 6/10

Your description was alright. It was a brief summary about the story and I did like it until you wrote; her life was peaceful and awesome..darling her parents just died, I don't think her life would be peaceful and awes