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[CONTENTID2]The Hwang Twins [/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: The Hwang Twins

Author: ilikechocolate

Main Characters: Jung Joona (OC), Myungsoo, Tiffany

Genre: Angst, Friendship, Romance, Schoollife

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Blessed with outstanding genes, magnificent brains and an overwhelming wealthy life, Hwang Myungsoo and Hwang Tiffany can nothing else but make you fall for them. Girls and even boys swoon over Myungsoo's handsomeness and charms while they fall head over heels for Tiffany's beauty and gentleness. Perfect creatures living the perfect life? Or are they....?

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 4/5
The first time I read the title I was like, "Ah. This is just one of those cliched stories where there'll be two twin girls blahblah.." but you proved me wrong! I was a little confused as first but yeah!

Graphics: 7.5/10
The poster was simple. You could have emphasized the "twins" more in the poster though. The background didn't match the poster too.

Description and Foreword: 7.5/10

I like the foreword. It's still lacking for me though. You didn't put the OC's introduction there which you should put since she's the main character of the story, right? Anyway, there were some errors and I tried to fix it. Here: Hwang Myungsoo and Hwang Tiffany can nothing else but make you fall for them. -> Hwang Myungsoo and Hwang Tiffany can do nothing else but make you fall for them. devided -> divided Being the prime ministers children -> Being the prime ministers' children She is probably the only one who isn't impressed by the twins, the only way she acknowledge them is that they beat her in every test leaving her in third place. ->  She is probably the o