[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for PictureMeBroken[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Tired of Falling[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Tired of Falling

Author: PictureMeBroken 

Main Characters: Sulli-centric, but Taemin, Sehun, Kai, Krystal, and Amber could also be considered main characters. 

Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Tragedy,  / Yuri

Status: Completed

Description of Story: Jinri falls and breaks easily, but Sulli, Sulli is stronger than that. At least ... she hopes she is.

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3/5

Your title was good but it didn’t inspire me to read it. Also, your title is common and unique meaning it probably won’t capture many people’s attention.

 

Graphics: 7/10

I don’t like landscape graphics so I didn’t really like yours. You also didn’t have a background which wasn’t too good for the appearance of the story. I suggest that you get a background as I’m sure other readers like your graphic!

 

Description and Foreword: 6/10

Your description was great. However, your foreword wasn’t. All those warning just spilled the story. I