"Vengeance"

Author: theangelvampire

Co-authors: lovepinata, qawsedr and exoandoreos

Main Characters: Kyungsoo, Kai, Tao, Kang Soo Jin (OC), Choi Yu Ri (OC)

Genre: Angst, Mystery, Psychological, Romance

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
Kai is a killer, a merciless one at that, until he fell in love.
When she was killed by the police officer, Do Kyungsoo, in attempt to save Kai, Kai swore on his life that he will get his revenge by killing Kyungsoo's family before he escaped.
At first, Kyungsoo though it was an empty threat. After all, they all knew who he was now and he would not be so reckless.
But when Kyungsoo received a phone call in the middle of the night from his sister, he knew something was very wrong when he heard her whimper in pain...
Will Kyungsoo manage to get hold of Kai before all those he loved are wiped out?

Story Title: 3/5

Title is story’s first impression, sometimes title attracts readers, making them to read story but sometimes wakes in them disinterest. When you are choosing the title, you are trying to find a title that would made your readers to read your story and to leave comments and not just subscribing. Your title is too overused and too common and cliche. But somehow he is relevant to your story.

Graphics: 8/10

I seen that you have two bg/poster but you changed it;that’s a big no. When your changing graphics oftenly readers tends to simply abandon a story and you want them to read right? So I would suggest you to stick with previous bg/poster rather than this one. This poster doesn’t screams to me ‘angst’ it’s rather fluffy or maybe is just me. That’s why I took out two points.

Description and Foreword: 10/10

Description and foreword were written very nicely and neatly, I didn’t encountered anywhere grammar, punctuation, typo mistakes. It was written like I am reading a book. It was very nice and relaxing for reading and this thing attracts readers, I even adore the layout you use.

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