[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for sapphireBLUEofficial[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Unfaithful Secrets[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Unfaithful Secrets

Author: sapphireBLUEofficial

Main Characters: Kim Jongin, Do Kyungsoo, Kris Wu-Fan, Byun Baekhyun

Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, ,  

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Since then, it had always been man's nature to commit mistakes, to simply love was not. But, who to love brings about a great difference. Baekhyun and Kai knew it was wrong. Wrong for them to love someone they already know who is being loved. But, having a little sip of that sweet sin, they craved for more. Only to remorse later from the bitter aftertaste of their own unfaithful deeds. It was their friendship of four that lasted for 7 years and a couple of love that bloomed on the fourth, only to be rendered unchaste on the sixth. A story of Love, Friendship & Betrayal, Unfaithful Secrets. In the end, who wins and who loses?

"I love you...please...love me back..." — Kyungsoo "I'll never be that same guy I used to be." — Kai "So, I'm 'JUST' a Kris now to you, huh?" — Kris "As long as they don't know, right?" — Baekhyun

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

This title isn't very much comun, and I didn't found any story with similar title. To say you this, you made me click on your story instantly as soon as I got your link. It draw my attention. Title's not unique or cliche so every new reader would be curious about this story as much as I was so good job!

 

Graphics: 8/10

I really loved your banner and background BUT. I think you should have used much romantic/misterious background, because the story is about the secrets between your characters. Just the colours didn't seem to give me the right feeling. That's all.

 

Description and Foreword: 8/10

You put much bigger description; you did maazing job without allowing reader to predict what is going to happen in late chapters which i