[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for BearLover[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]The Other Side[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: The Other Side

Author: BearLover

Main Characters: Kai and Kyungsoo of EXO

Genre: Fantasy/Supernatural, Romance,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Do Kyungsoo was kicked out from home after his parents found out that he’s gay. Sleeping on the streets for almost a week with whatever money left in his pockets, he was tired, starving and dirty. An old lady came and told him, if he finds her missing cat that ran into the Dark Forest, she’ll give him food and a place to stay. Kyungsoo took up the offer and went inside the forest. The old lady waited for him…but he never came back.

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3/5

Your story title is not original nor unique, if you search up "The Other Side" on AFF you will find many other fanfic titles with the same title, now from the first 3 chapters which you have posted, honestly it doesn't really fit well. It has the mysterious feeling coming out of it and it might attract readers but it's not really eye-catching enough. Maybe something that would link in with gay and disgrace, i.e; Am I a Disgrace? . Thinking up of titles for fanfics is not my forte and I can't really give a good one for your story as you haven't went into depth with it yet, Mianhe T^T

 

Graphics: 8/10

Your poster is amazing but I felt it was too fairytale like, the colours contrasted very well with eachother and the pictures of D.O and Kai looks very heavenly and flawless but I would've thought there would be a little darkness or have a tiny angst feeling as he didn't come back from the Dark Forest, but it is very good. That was the only thing I took points off for since I don't care much for backgrounds and I did really like your poster ^^

 

Description and Foreword: 10/10

In your description, you put the summary of the story which I did