[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for --obsidian[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Sass Got y[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Sass Got y

Author: --obsidian

Main Characters: Lee Donghae, Lee Hyukjae

Genre: Friendship, Romance, Schoollife,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Donghae is the new kid in school, who makes it his mission to turn Hyukjae (the resident head) into someone that even angels would bow down to.

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

Just by looking at the story’s title, you can determine that this story is going to be a very humorous, sort-of-crack themed plot. Especially the “sass” part: it really encouraged me to read on. 

Graphics: 8.5/10

I liked your poster, but I didn’t quite get the colors and background in your poster – it’s supposed to be about school-life, isn’t it? If you’re to request a poster again for this, perhaps request the poster shop to put the background of a school, maybe?

Description and Foreword: 8/10

Your description was all right, but the details were a bit vague and generic, and it might not coax people to read on more. 

Characterization: 10/10

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