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[CONTENTID2]Beautiful Tragedy[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Beautiful Tragedy

Author: exoexo123

Main Characters: Song Aerri (OC), Luhan, Sehun

Genre: Mystery & Romance 

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Aerri and Sehun were lovers for a long time, but Sehun died because of an accident, Luhan comes in the story but Aerri doesn't want to love again, what would luhan do? Especially when he himself doesn't know his secrets?

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3/5

To put it flat out it's too common. Even though thinking of a unique, different title that stands out is hard, I personally don't think it fits in with the current story. The tragedy part is alright but the beautiful was the thing that I felt was weird, The death of Sehun was a tragedy but was it beautiful? Those were going through my head whilst reading it.

Graphics: 0/0

I can't rate you on that one since there's no poster ^^;

Description and Foreword: 9.5/10

I think it's really good. It's taking parts of the story but not exactly and it shows her emotions and how much she loves this man to see it in someone else. The foreword is pretty much perfect just some grammar errors, such as...
Original: "But people are right, THERE'S NO SUCH THING LIKE HAPPY ENDING"
It should be:
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