[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for LoveinColors[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Fallen Hostage[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Fallen Hostage

Author: LoveinColors

Main Characters: Lu Han, OC, EXO

Genre: Action, Angst, Mystery,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: He was a paid assassin and his latest mission was to kidnap the daughter of an important politician. His plan seemed perfect, until he met his hostage. She was nothing like he thought.

From MissAshley: First of all im going to say that the way i review your story is not same like other reviewer. So if u dont like the way i review, u can request again from another reviewer. Im sorry..

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 4/5

I didnt find the title is unique but still the title is really good and i like it. A lot. ^^

Graphics: 9/10

WOW. The graphic is so cool and i really loves the tone colour. But the blending with the girl and Luhan seems a bit mess. And t