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"Sasaeng's Pen"

Author: cuteismysterious

Main Characters: Yong Jinkyu (You/OC), EXO's Baekhyun and various Korean Idols

Genre: Drama

Status: On-going

Description of Story: "Do not judge a book by it's cover," they say. But why does the society kept on judging without researching and actually meeting us? 

 


Critique:

Story Title: 4/5

Your title was unique but not catchy. That’s why you lost a mark for it, however, good job for making it sound unique!

 

Graphics: 2/10

Your poster and background disgusted me. I suggest that you request one as it really didn’t suit your story, even though you explained the meanings behind each part of your poster.

 

Description and Foreword: 4/10

Your description was hard to understand. It’s because you used incorrect grammar which did somehow match the sentence. Also, you should have explained that Sasaeng is a Korean word along with the definition. The meaning behind the poster was not needed as your poster really didn’t show anything, to be honest.

 

Characterization: 3/10

While reading your story I really couldn’t catch a definite personality

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