[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for Nhoxmew[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]This Everlasting Devotion[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: This Everlasting Devotion

Author: Nhoxmew

Main Characters: Sunggyu and Woohyun

Genre: Angst, Drama, Fantasy/Supernatural, Romance,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Cursed with a bittersweet fate, as lovers, they shall cross each other's path in every lifetime. Yet as strong as it may be, their love will never be answered. --- Human souls do not perish. They were created by The Great and recycled over and over again (and sometimes stored away due to overpopulation). Thus reincarnation exists. Every millennium, human souls, chosen upon creation, take turns to be Gods, whose power is second to only The Great, their creator. Their job is to govern their own given elements and above all, to look over humanity. Two male gods, engaging in a love-hate relationship, caused massive chaos during a silly fight in the holy Palace called Paradise, otherwise known as Heaven. Their actions greatly angered The Great to the point that he regretted ever choosing them as one of The Chosen Souls. What was done has been done; he could not revert his decision; instead, he decided to punish them. A punishment that will last eternally.

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3/5

Your title was alright. This Everlasting Devotion; you could tell right away, it was going to be angst, romance ect ect. I think it's really powerful and will draw readers in. Your title is unique and definetley original as nobody else has the same title. For your title, it has a meaning but I can't exactly pick it out yet since you only have a prolouge and a chapter but maybe after a couple chapters you can request again ^^ (If I'm still here XD) The words you used were really strong and as I said powerful; everlasting = infinity/forever devoti this case I think it would be devoting yourself/ loyalty.

 

Graphics: 8/10

Your graphics were great, it had the angst feel but still has the God image sprouting out XD For your poster you had a stars of the Zodiac behind it - connecting stars to make a shape, which I thought was really pretty as it says in the prolouge that they were in Heaven/Paradise. The colours of the two main characters blended in very well, you contiued using the colour theme and not going for another one, which I tend to do XD For the font use- I think it was done very well, especially how the 'everlasting' was in another font, it creates dimesion. I'm not a professional graphic designer, so I can't really rate much about your poster XD 
For your background, It was still the starry navy blue colour and had the two pictures with the quote: "Do you believe in second chacnces", which is relevant to the story. I don't really care for backgrounds as they are the shadow supporting the poster, but it does kind seem like it's trying to make the poster it's shadow, honestly it's nothing big, you don't need to worry about it ^^

 

Description and Foreword: 6/10

Your description wasn't really my favourite part, it was too short. Like your other s