[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for madigraye[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]A Half A Page[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: A Half A Page

Author: madigraye

Main Characters: Byun Baekhyun and OC

Genre: Action, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance, Tragedy

Status: Completed

Description of Story: Baekhyun is a student with a terrible secret that leads to his classmate finding him beaten and bloodied in a dumpster night after night. She chooses to start taking care of him despite his reluctance to tell her anything. They say secrets make you fall in love; it's no different for her.

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 4/5

I like the title it's very unique. It also goes with the story and that's very important. It makes wonder why it's calle "A Half A Page".

 

Graphics: 3/10

It's only a picture of Baekhyun, and that's just too simple. There is no background also, and the background is very important. If you could of added maybe a ripped sheet a notebook paper with "Thank You" written on it as the background, then it would of catches attention, and gone perfect with the title.

 

Description and Foreword: 7/10

i liked the description because it gave a mysterious feel to the story. It made wonder what type of secret would get get him beaten up almost every single night. The forward just explains why it was written, not really ex