☑ UbiquitousFriend

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Calling for UbiquitousFriend

"Replaying Farewell"

Author: UbiquitousFriend

Main Characters: Kim Myungsoo, Jung Soojung, Jo twins, Bae Suzy, Infinite, EXO

Genre: Angst, Drama, Fantasy/Supernatural, Mystery, Romance, School Life, Tragedy

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
Jung Soojung has long lived a life where she was stuck loving a new person every year, at a similar time. One day she meets a mysteriously cute boy at 'Café Te Amo', and she somehow knew that this time it would be different. Desperate to unlock the curse that condemns her love, Soojung must visit her past. Each year, each love, holds a different clue. Along the way, she meets with new people, reunites with old ones, smiles for the first time and cries for the last time. Is this boy her last? Will she be able to settle down? Find happiness? Live?




 

  Critique:

Graphics: 5.5/10

Being truthful, your poster's quality is poor. It seems likely to me that you merely searched up "myungstal" images and inserted the title on it. The poster itself didn't match the story's theme or plot and its format didn't fit being a fanfic poster, if you get what I mean. Not only so, the title's coloring made it difficult for me to make out what it says. I've seen your message at the end of the foreword and I truly hope you'll find some time to make another poster, or better yet, request for one from a professional designer if you can't find the time. Besides that, the little character introduction as well as the trailer was nicely done. They both gave off a melancholy feel that matches with the story.

 

Description and Foreword: 6.5/10

First off, I have to say the comment about Krystal was a bit unnecessary. She actually has lots of fans and even if she doesn't, there's really no need to add that. By putting "Jung Soojung/OC", I think you've made it pretty clear that she can also be viewed as an OC. Your brief description of the story was well written. It had a serious tone to it that was really fitting and intriguing too. A suggestion to watch out for your commas:
1) How long will she have to endure this until she'll be able to settle down, be happy and finally find her place?
     Edited: How long will she have to endure this until she'll be able to settle do

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