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[CONTENTID2]Dude, You're Not My Style[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Dude, You're Not My Style

Author: xiaolu_m

Main Characters: Chae Kyung (OC), Kris, Chanyeol

Genre: Romance, Schoollife

Status: On-going

Description of Story: It all started when the Kingka of the school - Kris Wu started to call her a fatty. And since he was the Kingka, everyone started to follow along with him, making her life miserable. Kris Wu, the name Chaekyung despised. Not being able to take the bullies anymore, Chae Kyung left the school and moved to America. But it wasn't the end yet. The real reason she left was to prepare for revenge. She went to America and got a full-body laser surgery. After that she returned to Korea , she changed her name to Song Ah Ri. Boys started to drool whenever she walked passed them. She was now called the Ulzzang Song Ah Ri. But she didn't do all this to gain people's attention. Her real mission; making Kris Wu fall for her and then break his heart into tiny little pieces.

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

I absolutely love your title :D I liked how you took "Chicken, is not my style" and changed it to "Dude, you're not my style" I found it funny ^^ Your title is grammar error free, everything is perfect, comma after dude, and all the first letter in the words are in capitals ^^ You could tell right away it was going to be a romance, heartbreak kind of story so I did like it :P 

 

Graphics: 9/10

At first glance I honestly really liked it but then I looked down and I- okay not hated it but it I didn't like it as much as when I took a glance XD The bottom made it look as if it was a DVD and if that was the look you were going for....sorry XD I liked how instead of cropping the characters outs you picked pictures with nice backgrounds that complimented each other and blended them in together. Now I know some authors don't make there own poster which sometimes I hate to grade since I know they probably can't get it changed by themselves but I couldn't find if it was you who made it or not, if so then you have some nice editing techniques ^^ I liked the font you used for "Dude, you're not my style" since it's very game like which was the 'concept' I guess for this story as she wants to break his heart and end it kinda like a game ^^
For backgrounds..I'm not even going to talk about that Maybe if you want to have a background, a light pale cream grey will do fine ^^<-- Yes I live in Britain 

 

Description and Foreword: 9/10

Your description showed why she went to America as in the first chapter it showed her coming to Korea so I understood that. It gave us her backg