[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for BearLover[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Chats with EXO[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Chats with EXO

Author: BearLover 

Main Characters: EXO Members

Genre: 

Status: On-going

Description of Story: EXO are chatting to one another in this funny (hope so) and exciting fic! Come and read them, you might as well be invited to be featured in a chapter!

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 2.5/5

To make this fair I'm giving you 2.5 as that is half of 5, as your title is not original nor unique but relevant to the story. Now I find this title; Chats with EXO, cliche and not really fun. I didn't understand it at first (Because I'm a weirdo -_-), but then after looking at your first chapter, I realized it was a chatroom with the EXO members talking ect ect. I think you should've laid- that's a whole different thing XD. For your title, I think using a fake websites name is a good start as that is kinda what it's basing off of -> I'll talk more on that probs on grammar/writing. Anyway something like EXOCRACKCHATROOM.COM, as that is kind of confusing but it caught my eye or EXOCC.COM/EXCITINGXINGORANGE.COM, XO You would be curious to what that meant and would probably click on it..or not XD

 

Graphics: 3/10

You have a background..ugh XD Your background is too 'white' and the hot pink isn't helping the reader focus on the story, it's really distractin, I personally think something cute with EXO but isn't really getting into your way kind of background is nice. Something like: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/708504/exocrack-com-comedy-crackfic-exo-exok-exom-crack, I feel like your story kind of is similar to that one except theirs is Suho creating a webstie, not really chatroom, get it? Your poster...you don't have any, I don't really count a picture as a poster. Consider getting one as it will be the first thing to attract a reader. For me, when it comes to graphics mainly the points are for the poster, it's hardly the background as that's what's meant to support le poster >3< There are very good poster shops, and many are available so check them out ^^

 

Description and Foreword: 4/10

I'll be alittle mean today but when you wrote:

Baekhyun to be mean

Lame jokes

Baekhyun in denial

Kai and Sehun thinks they're y

Krease acting all cool and calm

Kyungsoo revealing other member's secrets

KaiSoo,Taoris, HunHan, BaekYeol, ChenMin, SuLay

Luhan being the y, not-so-innocent cat

Last but not least, you guys CAN BE FEATURED in one