☑ FlyhereFlythere
Mental Breakdown Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ ARCHIVES"The Vow"
Author: FlyhereFlythere
Main Characters: Tiffany and Taeyeon
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance,
Status: On-going
Description of Story:
A blissful marriage, with precious memories spent together.
But she doesn't remember, she doesn't even recognize her.
And Taeyeon sets on a journey,
one to make her fall in love again.
But the road in front of her is never going to be easy.
Critique:
Graphics: 9.5/10
The graphics is really well laid out and does fit into the story.
Description and Foreword: 9/10
Your description is like a poem feeling and the quoting in general is nice. I just hoped that you would give some more detail I believe. It seems like it is fine though if you do not want to change it.
Characterization: 9/10
I like how you put the characters in one place and who they are. You should give some detail as well to let the readers know who they are b
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