[CONTENTID1]Archive : Review for Lu-labby[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]The Revival of Angel Sword[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: The Revival of Angel Sword 

Author: Lu-llaby

Main Characters: Sehun, Luhan, Kai, D.O

Genre: Action, Angst, Fantasy/Supernatural, Romance, School Life,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: Five hundred years ago, Vampires and Demons were in war with each other. They became one after The Dark Knight ed The Angel Sword on the boundary between Demons area and Vampires area, connecting the two area as one. Even so, Vampires and Demons don't rule the world, humans are the leaders even though Vampires and Demons are stronger than them. But for the two kind's sake, they let humans become the rule. So they built D' Empires Academy. The Academy that humans made for Demons and Vampires. The students study in peace there. But, what if someone unexpected comes...?

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

It's original and it associates very well with your story. It's not a big thing there's a mistake:
The Revival Of Angel Sword -> It doesn't make sense, if it's singular add 'a/an' before it so, The Revival Of An Angel Sword; since it is one sword. ^^

Graphics: 10/10

I liked the variety of things put onto the poster but it doesn't clash with eachother; like the ancient clock behind Luhan and Sehun in the foreword maybe to represent the time of when the demons and vampires became one. It was very meaningful. For you background, I liked how there was faded pictures, it gives off the distant feel which I liked. :)

Description and Foreword: 8.5/10

I could see that you took the review that I done before into consideration for the description/intro. The only thing was that, towards th