[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for intoxicatedliar[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]The Bet[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: The Bet

Author: intoxicatedliar

Main Characters: Taeyeon and Baekhyun

Genre: Schoollife

Status: On-going

Description of Story: A new student, Taeyeon, joined Winterhills High School. She is known as 'perfection'. The school's biggest player,Baekhyun, got interested in her and made a bet with his friends. However, during the process they started to fall in love with one another. But, what if Taeyeon found out about the bet?

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3.5/5

The title wasn't unique. A good experiment I use is typing your title witk Asianfanfics. Try typing 'The Bet Asianfanfics' on Google. You'll notice that there are other stories with the same title as yours. On the other hand though, it suits the theme of the story and it is very relevant since the story is revolved around that 'bet.' Overall, the title was good since it matches the plot, but you could've chosen a more unique title.

 

Graphics: 8/10

Actually, I'm a big fan of gif posters, that's why I eyed your poster the moment I saw it. The effects were good, but I would'be liked it better if Baekhyun and Taeyeon's picture at the middle were a bit lighter. It came out more of angst for me if it weren't for its cute background. It's just my opinion though.

I recommend using a background too. You readers won't see your poster all the time, so if you put a background and they scroll down, it'll add to the effects right? Anyway, it's worth a shot. ^^

I also like the fact that there was a trailer for your story. It would have been better, but I think it matched the plot. It just seemed too y of a trailer for a schoollife-themed story. My conclusion after watching it was that she will have revenge at the end. Not sure though! It's just a hunch. ^^

Overall, the graphics were good. My only recommendation was putting a background for more effects.

 

Description and Foreword: 7.5/10

First and foremost, in the Character section, add an 'and' at the middle of Taeyeon and Baekhyun.

Second, your brief summary, which you put in your foreword, was fine. I just hope that the plot has many twists on it since you put too much information.

Third, it would be better if you put it in your description so when your readers scroll down after seeing the poster, they'd immediately see the summary. Decrease the font size. It's too big. A size of 14-16 is preferrable, since it's not too big nor too small. You could try aligning it to the center as well, making it more presentable.

Fourth, your character chart was fine. I just think that it'd be better if you put a tiny bit of information about the characters there. It looked boring to me with just their pictures attached.

Last but not the least, is your foreword. You put what you want to say on it, like credits, your author's note, etc. It's what commonly put in there anyways. Make sure not to put too large font sizes and as much as possible, make it presentable by matching it with the fonts you used on the description, ma