☑ capricciofarce
Mental Breakdown Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ ARCHIVES"Liberamente"
Author: capricciofarce
Main Characters: EXO OCs: — Nakasekai Mikoto / Nakasekai Marianne
Tenebrarum / Darkness — Sol / Sun — Luna / Moon
Genre: Alternate Universe, Fantasy/Supernatural, Friendship
Status: On-going
Description of Story:
If the world you live in isn’t what it seems,
And you are the key to set things right,
Would you find the courage to do so,
Even if you lose yourself along the way?
Critique:
Story Title: 5/5
The title is very unique, I've never heard anything like this. Also it kinda sounds like it's in Latin. Making it even more unique and I like it a lot. It goes perfectly with the uniqueness of the story.
Graphics: 8/10
The background goes with the story because they come from somewhere else, and the background is space. The poster is very good it fits well with the background. It gives a good mysterious feel to the story. It is captivating, and we'll made. Also a thing I like is that both background and poster go with the story. Some writers make a perfectly good story but the poster usually doesn't go with it, and that doesn't help the reader get a mental image what it should portray. Also the trailer gave it an even more appealing look to the story. I really liked the trailer, but also this would of been good without it. Since you already have a good start with poster and background. But it's a good addition.
Description and Foreword: 9/10
I like the description, and the question got me thinking. I would sacrifice myself to save others. You added a quote that has a very good meaning and definition to this story and I agree, heroes are made by the paths they choose. Also the definition of liberamente clarified why you ch
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