"Close Your Eyes"

Author: sushi-mushi

Main Characters: EXO-- Main: Sulay // Side: Baekyeol, Hunhan, Taoris

Genre: Angst, Family, Fluff, Friendship, Romance

Status: Completed

Description of Story:
Zhang Yixing
He was a mystery to poor Suho. After all, they were complete opposites~
Suho, the nerdy studious boy who read on the playground.
Yixing, the popular, angelic looking boy who was always surrounded by friends and admirers.
But for some reason, Yixing had singled Suho out to be his best friend; his partner in crime.
Fate had tied these two completely different boys together, but they're not as different as they appear.
And fate, dark and cruel as it is, rips these two men apart.
But Suho knows he'll be okay as long as Yixing's there to tell him.

Story Title: 3/5

It's a nice, cute title, but I don't find it very fitting because I feel that the story focuses on every couple that was mentioned rather equally. 

Graphics: 7/10

The poster wasn't memorable at first glance. It was definitely cute, but it didn't catch my attention. Once I read it I found the relativity of the pastel colors and the "calmness" it gives off.

Description and Foreword: 6/10

Description: I saw you wrote a '~' after a sentence. I think that there is no need for that, I would have used the correct punctuation mark: a period. And the last sentence, where you end it with "~Just Close Your Eyes~" doesn't need the '~', I would have wrote it like "But Suho knows he'll be okay as long as Yixing's there to tell him, 'just close your eyes'". However, after reading the story, I figured that the description just focused on SuLay's relationship, while the story is about every couple (I mean, the epilogue was completely TaoRis, and the story has focus on ChanBaek and HunHan as well). So I would try to add them as well in the description. 

Characterization: 10/10

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