[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for ForeverRainbow[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Of Sunflowers and Blood Red Poppies[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Of Sunflowers and Blood Red Poppies

Author: ForeverRainbow 

Main Characters: Niel, Amie Cho

Genre: Angst, Romance

Status: Completed

Description of Story: A drabble based on my ongoing story, Profound Contradiction. Set in the distant future of the two character's lives, this gives readers a glimpse of a possible future of the two. She was cursed with an expiration date. He was blessed with a healthy life. When one wants to ignore the fine prints of their love, will the other relent? 

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

There is no doubt that your title captures readers and fits to the story perfectly. Reading it gives me a feeling of calmness, peace and I suddenly feel the nature. I know, it may sounds weird, but that’s how strong it reaches to me. 

 

Graphics: 10/10

Like your title, the poster it’s perfect. I have nothing to say on that. 

 

Description and Foreword: 9/10

No problems with your description, its captivating, gives off an angst feeling, makes me curious. I can already guess that the end will be (not going to spoil anything for future readers from this shop) ******** but I still want to know. 
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