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"Healing Lost"

Author: chubbyfaceDiVa

Main Characters: Kim Jaejoong

Genre: Angst

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
What happens when your biggest source of comfort suddenly disappears, only to chase you into the deep hell of your own despair?
Where do you turn? Who gives you release?

 

  Critique:

Story Title: 5/5

The title catched my eye instantly on the first reading, it reminded me on ubnfortunate and unrequited love but later on I was so wrong. :D Title 'Healing Lost' isn't common in the world of AFF and other fanfiction sites so you choosed unique and great title! And also I simply adore title you specified 'Namanoe Wiro'.  Also the title already gives that angsty feel that story has so good job on choosing title! 

 

Graphics: 7/10

Stage's lights as background? I like it, it's very unique background and also it fits to story quiet well. Poster? I am not so sure. Don't take this wrong way, but like I already had suggested you in lateste review ask someone to make a poster for you and background. Because posters attracts more readers. True poster fits very ell with the story but I would suggest yu to ask someone to make it for you. :)

 

Description and Foreword: 10/10

Wow...I made sure to read every chapter carefully to see if you have errors but nope, I didn't. I am very suprirsed and happy that I can read story without been confusing. Description and Foreword? I love them! Description is very neatly. Very well written. Foreword I liked more because YOU used lyrics of my favorite song that fits with the story quiet well. :D

 

Characterization: 10/10

In first chapter, we are seeing Jaejoong waiting for Yoo Rim he is slowly struggling