[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for Dokmishin[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Monsieur meets his Mademoiselle[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Monsieur meets his Madamoiselle

Author: Dokmishin

Main Characters: Park Shinhye and Jung Yonghwa

Genre: Romance

Status: Completed

Description of Story: Park Shinhye aka Mademoiselle meets the jerk CEO Jung Yonghwa aka Monsieur.

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5
The title was eye-catching. It was so unique that it easily gained my attention. ^^ The title looks professional, if you ask me.

Graphics: 8/10
I love your poster. I usually prefer gif posters and yours definitely looked like hardwork. It was simple yet eye-catching. I would like to recommending putting up a background for your story though to make it more attractive since the more attractive your page is, the more readers you'll have. (It's true. I learned it the hard way.) Also, no matter how beautiful your poster is, if the reader scrolls down the page, he/she'll not see the poster anymore so it's better if you have a background to add more effect. Make sure it matched your poster. :D

Description and Foreword: 7.5/10

You should try providing a short and brief summary of what your story is about. Put it at the description part so that when the reader scrolls down, after they see the poster, they'll immediately read the summary. You should fix the font size and spacing as well. It was not consistent. Your font size on the character chart was 14-16 while your foreword was too large. Fix the spacing as well. They're too far away from each other. They don't contain too much texts too. The readers would be uncomfortable with scrolling down all the time.

Characterization: 10/10

You did a good job with your characters. I think you explained each perso