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[CONTENTID2]η κόρη του χρόνου[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: η κόρη του χρόνου

Author: -Tigress- 

Main Characters: SNSD's Jessica and f(x)'s Amber

Genre: Fantasy/Supernatural, Romance, Yuri

Status: Completed

Description of Story: The Daughter of Time, also known as Jessica, only wants to get away from it all.

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 4/5

I liked your title but I didn't like the fact that it was written in a different language. I was only excited to read your fanfic when I read the English translation of the title. 

 

Graphics: 10/10

I can see that you put quiet an amount of effort towards your graphics and background. I loved your graphic!　There is nothing else to say about your background and graphics.

 

Description and Foreword: 2/10

I understand the fact that you were trying to not tell the readers too much information about your fanfic but the description was way too short. Normally description gives the readers brief information about the setting, plot and a bit about the personality of the characters. In your case you did two of them; the plot of the story and description of the story. However, it isn't enough and it can make the reader lose interest for your story. Your description of the character and plot was very bad as it didn't tell us anything but that there is a demi-goddess of time who is going to have to become a goddess however, doesn't want it.

 

Characterization: 7/10

I loved how you took your time through out your chapters to c