[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for nfhafiza[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Ludos[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Ludos

Author: nfhafiza

Main Characters: EXO's Kai and OC

Genre: Romance

Status: On-going

Description of Story: When he asked her to be his girlfriend, she is well aware of the game he’s playing. When she said yes, he realizes there’s another game she’s playing on her side. They both comprehend they’re not in love, they both understand the risk of putting their hearts on the line. They both realizes that this would probably end in a mess. They know, it’s just that they don’t care.

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

Its really a great title! I love the title so much! ^^

Graphics: 8/10

It will be perfect if you replace the couple picture with a dice or smthg related to game.

Description and Foreword: 9/10

It really attracts my attention and i