☑ chubbyfaceDiVa
Mental Breakdown Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ ARCHIVES"Boy in the Hand-Bound, Red Book"
Author: chubbyfaceDiVa
Main Characters: Kai, Luhan, Lay
Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Fantasy/Supernatural, Psychological
Status: On-going
Description of Story:
Words. It's only too easy to believe someone when they're telling you exactly what you want to hear. Yet, those very words are our surest way of knowing someone.
Welcome!
To a world where truth is never what it seems. A world where no one knows what reality, really is...
Not even its speaker...
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Critique:
Story Title: 4/5
I think the title is pretty unique and it gives some insight to what the story is going to be about. It helps set the mood too. I did cut off one mark since the title is kind of long. Many people won't click on the link for your story while they're browsing through fancies since it's too long. Many readers (including me) don't like long titles which require you to actually click the link to see the full title.
Graphics: 7/10
I like your poster since it shows all the main characters. I cut off some points because the actual story title was really tiny and hard to read. I think the poster could use more emphasis in that aspect. I like the background though.
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