[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for Hope-For-Snow[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Frosted Heart[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Frosted Heart

Author: Hope-For-Snow

Main Characters: Xiumin/Kim Minseok, Kang Jan Aea/Janea

Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance

Status: Completed

Description of Story: “And yet, they cross paths and their fates intertwine. One hates, while the latter's love is sublime. Fear grips the other, while one is brave, Will the fearless be able to save the bearer who is consumed by ice? Will a fire melt the Frosted Heart and pay a price?”

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

I saw that you wanted me to talk about your title and maybe give other titles that I thought might fit your story.....making titles up for stories aren't my forte, they come and go honestly it should be what your happy with, yes sometimes it might not fit the story and other times it can fit really well, Frozen Heart, I really don't think you honestly need to change it, it fits well with your story and hardly anybody has the same fanfic title as you so it is unique but the only thing is that you use 'common' words i.e frozen and heart <- Too common maybe use words such as Frigid Heart....Honestly that does capture my attention XD Maybe I should make a fanfic (JK,JK) ^^

Graphics: 8/10

Your poster gave me a very angst, murderous, dark feeling from it which when after reading your one-shot I could not feel any XD The models (Ehem..Xiumin and girl model that you found on interenet) fit the role very well since you described their appearance really well it links in with the poster pictures ^^ I liked how you also used blue and black and white as they make you feel cold (well if your in a hot country maybe not but you get what I mean XD) For background I haven't taken off any points because...I don't care about that XD (To yeolwho....mianhe I swore XD) if you do want a background, something like a gradient blue to dark blue would be nice ^^

Description and Foreword: 9/10

I didn't really quite like the description/summary because it didn't feel right to me XD The first line "And yet, they cross paths and their fates intertwine." it just doesn't feel right, the words "and yet" are used for after a line, i.e

"They were told to not love each other
and yet they did
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