[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for seopsquared[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]For Blue Skies[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: For Blue Skies

Author: seopsquared

Main Characters: Soohyun and Kiseop (Main), other members of U-KISS

Genre: Angst, Tragedy

Status: Completed

Description of Story: Emotional pain driven to the idea of suicide is always a hard thing to swallow. Taking your own life may be an easier way out, but have you ever thought about who you're leaving behind with the aftermath? Have you ever thought about the impact it would have on them? After a long year has passed, Soohyun finds himself writing down the words that he's been wanting to say to Kiseop all this time, but will never actually have the chance to. Will they reach to wherever Kiseop is? He'll never know, but he just can't leave these words left unsaid...

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 3/5

Your title was unique in a way, however, the words’ blue sky’ was pretty common in many other fics’ title which dragged your mark down.

 

Graphics: 7/10

Your graphic was very pretty and it caught my attention. You would’ve have gotten a 9-10 if your background matched your graphic which didn’t. 

 

Description and Foreword: 8/10

You really didn’t had to in