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"Leaning on the Edge"

Author: chubbyfaceDiVa

Main Characters: Kim Jaejoong

Genre: Angst

Status: On-going

Description of Story:
"To be, or not to be: that is the question:
Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,
Or to take arms against a sea of troubles,
And by opposing end them? To die: to sleep;
No more; and by a sleep to say we end" – Hamlet.
It was a soliloquy JaeJoong often found himself repeating.
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"Life... A mystery it is, with its many ups and downs - sometimes more downs than ups.
So, what do you do then?
What do you do when living itself becomes the tougher challenge?
How do you cope?
Do you wallow in your sorrows or do you take arms against the sea?", JaeJoong wonders.
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So, will JaeJoong find his answer?
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  Critique:

Story Title: 4/5

Your story’s title was unique but it didn’t catch my attention. I, myself, don’t know why and how, because your title is unique. But, good job with thinking of a title that is unique and uncommon!

 

Graphics: 5/10

Your poster really disgusted me. Normally, good stories have great posters, resulting not so good stories (in grammatical sections) have not so good posters (I hope I didn’t offend anyone here.) What I’m saying is that Posters give readers the first impression of the fic. So, if you have bad poster you will not gain many readers. However, if you do, it just means there are whole lot of other rea

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