[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for kroncubine[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Masked, Wrecked Robot[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Masked, Wrecked Robot

Author: kroncubine

Main Characters: Luhan (EXO), Eunseo (OC)

Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance

Status: On-going

Description of Story: This story depicts a girl whose heart was wrecked after the wedding day which was supposed to be the happiest day of her life. She was not informed about her own marriage, yet she accepted it as a good fortune. She was abused, unloved and tortured by her husband, yet she chose to stay with him and hoped that he could love her just like how she loves him. Will her love story come to a beautiful ending like she hoped for, or will it be wrecked just like her heart?

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

Your title is unique and original. It is relevant to the story, but I still didn't really think it fits the story well. You can choose another title though. Now me choosing a title for a story is not my forte because I at it so I can't help you. Maybe ask another reviewer ?  

 

Graphics: 10/10

Your poster is very dark, angst and scary-like which is perfect for your story. It gave me the creeps... in a good way of course ^^ I liked how you have a mechanical feel relating a robot-concept ^^ I'm not the best at grading posters as I'm not a professional editor or any of that sort even though I do make posters but I'm not the best. XD You have a poster = great! No background = great but since this is an angst