[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for Fan_of_Karma[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Mr. Perfect[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Mr. Perfect

Author: Fan_of_Karma 

Main Characters: Myungsoo, Sungyeol, Sungjong, Hoya

Genre: Romcom, Schoollife,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: When Myungsoo changes high school, his life is completely turned upside down by the ego-istic super-idol Sungjong and his incredibly childish cousin Sungyeol. Myungsoo's sister definitely isn't making things easier, and neither is his celebrity crush Hoya.

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 1/5

Your story’s title is very common. It also doesn’t catch much attention so I suggest you come up with another one.

 

Graphics: 5/10

Your graphic was okay, expressing the theme ‘romcom’. However, I didn’t like how it was ripped at the bottom. Your background was okay, however, was too dark for a romcom theme. I suggest you change it to a lighter background.

 

Description and Foreword: 4/10

Your description was great in terms of grammar. However, I suggest you separate your description and warning. I also didn’t like the fact that you told the readers the pairings. I wouldn’t mind if it was one couple, however, it wasn’t right? I suggest you change it. Also, your foreword was way too long. I recommend that you take put unnecessary parts out.

 

Characterization: 7/10

You did a good job in describing the characters. However, it didn’t engage me really well. Also, if you describe the characters more in terms of th