[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for exoticara9[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Graveyard Boys, Season One[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: Graveyard Boys, Season One

Author: exoticara9

Main Characters: DO, Lay, Kai, Chanyeol, Suho

Genre: Drama, Mystery,

Status: On-going

Description of Story: In Busan, four perfect-looking boys aren't nearly as perfect as they seem. Yixing has a thing with older guys, and now he's hooking up with his sugar daddy. Jongin wants Luhan, but doesn't know how to say it. Kyungsoo wants his relationship with Sehun to go the next level. Chanyeol is confused with his uality, especially when his friends are all homos.

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 5/5

Your story title; Graveyard Boys, Season 1 is unique and original. I like how you put Season 1 as if there was going to be a Season 2 and more which I find original as well ^^ I liked how you used the group name as the title and there is a very angst feel from it which from your story there is alot of

Graphics: 9/10

Your poster has a very dark,muderous angst feel to it which I liked ,maybe  add a dark background as it will make the reader feel more tense and enclosed. It was hard to see the quote but none the less I still under stood it ^^ I liked how you put their eyes (that sounds really creepy) as it looks like they're staring at you, every thing you do they will know. Very creepy but matched in with the story every well. 

Description and Foreword: 10/10

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