[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for chubbyfaceDiVa[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]The Cat with his Ball[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: The Cat with his Ball

Author: chubbyfacediva

Main Characters: Changmin and TOP

Genre: ,  

Status: Completed

Description of Story: It's late at night and Seunghyun's mind is at it again. Yet, his playmate's asleep. What can he do to cure the blues? warning: Plotless

 

 

 

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 4/5

Title doesn't matching a story quiet well. I know you wanted to choose misterious title not common, but I think you should choose a different title if you want to attract more readers.

 

Graphics: 0/0

Okay. Let me ask you this? When you are clicking on any story around here. What is the first thing you see in writer's description? You will see poster and background. You can use any background you could find on tumblr. Because well-made poster/background IS attracting readers/subscribers. If you want I can suggest you few poster/background shops. 

 

Description and Foreword: 8/10

Your description had me hooked, made me to click on your story, it wasn't a too long description that other writers had which would made me to predict what would happen, whish is why I liked yours. But one word had me confused when you said,'cure the blues?' Did you mean balls? because I really found that word confusing. :-/

 

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