[CONTENTID1]Archive: Review for TheCupcakeKiseoppian[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]A Rose A Week[/CONTENTID2]

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Story Title: A Rose A Week

Author: TheCupcakeKiseoppian

Main Characters: TVXQ, SNSD; Tiffany, Seohyun, Taeyeon, OC's, SECRET, KARA

Genre: Action, Drama, Friendship, Romance 

Status: On-going

Description of Story: It is 1962 and the life of Max Changmin in Seoul, South Korea has only took a turn for the better. He's got the car, the house, the girls, the vip seats in clubs and parties, he's got the money and most important? He's got the job. But when a young maiden, a sweet young girl that works at a candy shop deliver him sweets at his home he feels ready to risk everything to be with her.

CRITIQUE:

Story Title: 4/5

Your title has a mysterious feel to it, but I don’t find a lot of ties with the story. I know that Changmin gave Jiae a rose, so from your title, I guess he’ll continue giving her roses as a sign of affection. Have to read more to find out. Anyway, I like the title so thumbs up

Graphics: 8/10

I like the poster, but I’m just curious about the road. Why it’s there? What’s supposed to mean? Also, you don’t have a background so I suggest a soft, light one will do.

Description and Foreword: 7/10

Good description, with minor mistakes, but you managed to sum up a part of your story. It makes the readers want to find out more since you didn’t give any spoilers, just that he feels ready to risk everything to be with her. But you didn’t specify his relationship with Tiffany... I think it’s an important detail that you should not leave out.

Characterization: 8/10

You concentrated more on Changmin and his four friends than